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Apr 4, 2022Liked by KiKi Walter

>>Leaving room for readers to find themselves in a story.<<

I'm currently writing a memoir and will season it's dialogue with a couple of open-ended questions for the reader to ponder. Thank you for the tip>

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Apr 3, 2022Liked by KiKi Walter

As a pharmaceutical marketing copywriter by day, I am used to having to tell complex stories in as few words as possible. My motto is, "If I had more time, I'd have made it shorter." I try to apply that skill to my personal writing too. Once I have a draft, I'll go back and remove extraneous words and passages, to distill the piece down to its essence. It's usually more powerful that way.

As a singer, I also pay attention to the rhythm of my sentences, so I related to the idea of letting the reader discover the emotional beats of your story.

Really looking forward to more of your insights, Mama Ki!

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Apr 3, 2022Liked by KiKi Walter

Funny enough, I've been told by others in a memoir writing course that I am too "minimalist" in my writing. One time, I actually went back and added a lot more detail, and then classmates said they liked the first version better. I'm also a minimalist in my worklife as a designer, and in my collage art.

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